Common Mistakes
These are common mistakes that students make on their papers
- Spell check and proof read your paper. In Word: Tools > Spelling and Grammar…
- Be sure to answer all the questions.
- Be sure to complete all assignment requirements. In paper 2 for example, if the assignment
requires you to list out a full URL you used for your paper, don’t put usnews.com,
but the full URL like http://health.usnews.com/articles/health/2008/09/12/black-womens-burden-an-epidemic-of-hiv.html
- Elaborate on your answers enough so I understand your position. One sentence answers
are not adequate.
- Remember to include your Name, Date, Assignment, Class, Class time, Title
- Remember to upload the correct format of .doc or .docx but .rtf and .txt are acceptable
if you don't have Microsoft Word
- Don’t turn in the paper late
- Indians are people from India or whose parents, grandparents, etc are from India.
Don't confuse Asian Indians with Native Americans or Indigenous People often referred
to as American Indians.
- Failure to cite correctly. There are several ways to provide a citation: Yang's distinction
between a narrow and broad definition of "ethnic group" raises some questions for
me (pp. 9-11)
- The paper may make good points and have some interesting stories, but grammar and
sentence structure needs a lot of work. Didn't mark you down for this, but please
go to the WRC Writing, Reading, Center at ATC-309 if you need help with writing mechanics
- Verb tense and subject are not in agreement. I were, they was...
- They're, their, there, are used incorrectly
- Effect and affect used incorrectly
- Don’t say: I think, I would say, it is my opinion, I truly believe that... Just say
what you want to say and leave these types of phrases out.
- Didn't apply definitions of racism correctly.
- Inferior confused with subordinate, superior confused with dominant. They are not
the same
- Do not use contractions, spell out don't to do not etcetera.
- If you refer to a webpage or blog, include the URL web page address or a screen shot
of the dialog
For papers about a news article showing racism or racial inequality:
- Didn’t look for their own articles. Those who did got a better grade.
- Used an article that was commenting or referred to another article that I couldn't
find.
- Used a blog entry instead of a news article
- Used a source that wasn't mainstream.